When I first started to peer review others’ work, it was difficult for me to know what kind of feedback to give. Now that I have more practice with it, I have become better able to give feedback on global revision. For example, in a first draft of one of my peer’s essay #2, I left a comment about making a part of one of their paragraphs a claim sentence. The sentence read “Beauty is an experience that combines not just the visual, but also the mental and emotional.” The arguments of the paragraph were better suited to support this claim sentence than their original one. One thing I still have room for growth on is leaving comments about overall organization and paragraph flow. I struggle with taking in the essay as a whole and visualizing how it should flow unless it is very obviously disorganized. Overall, from looking at my first and final peer reviews, it is clear that I have significantly improved.