My goal for revision is to work on strengthening my thesis and to refocus and finish my essay. My thesis has significantly changed since working through peer reviews and I now must work on choosing the parts of my essay that fit with my new thesis. In order to achieve this goal I will first rewrite my thesis, go through my current draft and pick out claim sentences and arguments that work with my new thesis, and work through a draft of my essay using my new focus. After that I will go back and rearrange and edit based on what I think fits and what does not. My biggest challenge will be having to rewrite a great deal of my essay and incorporating the multi-modal aspect. It might be difficult to find a way to incorporate three different types of media in my essay. I plan on providing links to the podcasts and inserting pictures but it might be hard to find a third type of media. If a challenge arises that I can’t solve on my own I will reach out to Professor Emerson or to someone I trust that can help me. I will also try my best to work through challenges on my own before reaching out but I will get help if I need to.
You don’t have to use three separate kinds of “media” but rather modes of communication. For example, you could arrange the text on your page with thoughtful intent and check spatial communication off your list.
I’m missing your revised–and more specific–thesis. Please reach out if you need any help. I’m happy that you included me as a resource in your revision plan!